tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35366904.post7597413411359374815..comments2023-03-26T02:08:21.155-06:00Comments on The Wondering Path of Sage Charles: 'How Great Thou Art' a preteristic revision ( 4th verse )Charles Shankhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02042934737059944268noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35366904.post-2892240918935952052007-05-28T15:35:00.000-06:002007-05-28T15:35:00.000-06:00I agree, Ed; and thanks for your comment,: that th...I agree, Ed; and thanks for your comment,: that the rhythm is somewhat messed up by the way I wrote ( revised ) it, but I don't think I'll change it, because the pattern seems to flow better, if you know what I mean.Charles Shankhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02042934737059944268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35366904.post-79515907484547515622007-05-28T14:35:00.000-06:002007-05-28T14:35:00.000-06:00Charles,For sake of rhythm, I would change the las...Charles,<BR/>For sake of rhythm, I would change the last verse to read:<BR/><BR/>Since Christ has come, with shout of acclamation,<BR/>He took me home, such joy now fills my heart.<BR/>And so I bow, in humble adoration,<BR/>And now proclaim: "My God, how great Thou art<BR/><BR/>Just a suggestion.<BR/><BR/>edAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com